Cinematic horror

The Last in Line

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Legend / folkloreOriginal CURSED fiction. The vaults are real; this story and its characters are invented.

18+ · contains sudden sound scares. Use Mute or “Scares: gentle” at any time; Reduce effects also silences them.

Setting: Edinburgh Vaults case file (documented history kept separate).

Recorded narrator · sound starts when you tap Listen.

  1. The guide said it with a smile. Whatever you do, do not be the last person in line. Everyone laughed. Then everyone shuffled, very casually, towards the front. Except Mara, who was busy taking a photograph.
  2. The tour moved on into the next chamber. Low stone. Dripping. The candlelight barely reached the walls. Behind Mara, she heard a footstep. Heavy. A boot on wet stone.
  3. She turned. Nothing but the dark of the last room. She hurried to catch up, and the footsteps hurried too.
  4. Something touched her heel. Then her ankle. Cold fingers, curious, like a child testing ice. She did not scream. She was too frightened to scream.
  5. When the tour came back up into the street, the guide counted heads. Fourteen, he said. That is odd. I started with thirteen.
  6. Mara looked at the photograph she had taken in the last room. It was too dark to see much. Only a face, very close to the lens, smiling with far too many teeth.